...请你描述你印象最深刻的那个假期。(不少于60

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Last summer ,my family and I went to Beijing for holiday. We visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the world Park and so on. In Beijing, I bought some souvenirs for my friends. We had a wonderful time there. The weather in   Beijing was very hot.But I was used to it. The people in Beijing were very friendly. When I needed help, they would help me. The food there was very nice. I liked Beijing very much. I wanted to visited it again.
试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，要求介绍自己经历过的假期。题目中给出的材料较为详细，动笔前应认真阅读所给问题确定写作内容，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点，适当发挥。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文的时态主要为一般过去时态，人称为第一人称。写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系。适当使用连接词。
点评：做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句。最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误。