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Last summer ,my family and I went to Beijing for holiday. We visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the world Park and so on. In Beijing, I bought some souvenirs for my friends. We had a wonderful time there. The weather in Beijing was very hot.But I was used to it. The people in Beijing were very friendly. When I needed help, they would help me. The food there was very nice. I liked Beijing very much. I wanted to visited it again.
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